Saturday, March 30, 2013

IB English Analysis Essay

First off, hello its been a long time since anyone has written anything, but this is for a good reason. IB. Yes this program has single-handily taken away so much precious time that me and my authors have had no time to sit down and write for the blog. However IB is slowly winding down, and I find myself discovering the little gem I have tossed away to the unmerciful realms of internet irrelevance. It is time to get back to the writing ways I had promised myself in the summer of 2012, and continue improving my ability to craft magic with words. For now I will leave you with one of the many assessments that has kept me away, enjoy.


Florentino and Juvenal: an analysis on the effects of juxtaposition
on characterization in Marquez’s Love In The Time Of Cholera


Gabriel Garcia Marquez, a nobel prize winning author, has a prowess when it comes to developing characters using unique methods. He best demonstrates this in his novel Love In The Time Of Cholera where he presents two main characters, Juvenal and Florentino, using juxtaposition which highlights key elements in their characterization that would not be noticeable without it. One such element is the distinction between the love expressed from both characters which becomes clearer as you compare the characters. Moreover the theme of class awareness and the effects social status have on the storyline can also be identified through the use of juxtaposition.
After Juvenal Urbino’s death, and the revealment that Fermina still has subtle feelings toward Florentino; a time-shift occurs in the next chapter where the reader is taken from a very old Florentino to a very young one. In here one gains a bit of insight of Florentino’s natural way of being before Fermina Daza. According to the text Florentino was, “ the most sought-after young man in his social circle... the girls in his circle held secret lotteries to determine who would spend time with him, and he gambled on spending time with them until the day he met Fermina Daza and his innocence came to an end” (Marquez 54). This depiction of Florentino is symmetrical to the description of Juvenal Urbino in a later chapter. This is the beginning of the parallel drawn between Florentino and Juvenal.
However taking a more microscopic look at the text around these passages can show one the first differences between Juvenal and Florentino through the vehicles of imagery and diction.The diction used around the selected passage involving Florentino could be described as euphonious, figurative, and connotative. Marquez uses words such as “somber”, “innocence”, and “sentimental” which gives Florentino a sense of weakness and negativity. Moreover, this type of diction depicts an emotionally fragile young man, thus explaining the zealous love Florentino expresses to Fermina. This image of Florentino would connect to the theme of love as both an emotional and physical ailment because a character with such volatile emotions would have a very strong interpretation of love, and the rejection of their love would become a cataclysm of emotional unrest. The text also expresses that Florentino was very popular among his peers, and the reason for this is a very figurative one. The text states the Florentino, “ knew how to dance the latest dances... recite sentimental poetry... [and] was always willing to play violin serenades”(54). All of these activities are of an artistic nature, which adds on a poetic element to the characterization of Florentino.
Shifting the attention to Juvenal, the story arrives at a point where Fermina rejects Florentino’s love in the most callous of ways. This catalyzes madness in Florentino, which fortifies the theme of love as a physical ailment as the novel portrays Florentino’s madness as fatal. However after endless letters and even a visit by Transito Ariza, Florentino’s mother, Florentino will not see Fermina for fifty-one years. The story exercises yet another time-shift leading to a twenty-eight years old Juvenal, who has returned to Colombia from a long stay in Paris, France. On his return he brings with him all the knowledge he gains while studying in France. Using this knowledge Juvenal sets out in a quest to ameliorate the medical ailments present in his home country. In his quest he meets Fermina Daza who he, “[succumbs to] without resistance” (105). This chapter makes firm the premise that juxtaposition is used between the characters of Juvenal and Florentino by using the same description of Florentino to describe Juvenal pre-Fermina which can be best seen in the following line, “ the girls in his circle held secret lotteries to determine who would spend time with him, and he gambled, too, on being with them,..., until he succumbed without resistance to the plebeian charms of Fermina Daza” (105).
As similar as these two descriptions seem there are still difference between the characters due to diction and imagery. Through closer inspection one can see that specific word choices made by Marquez gives Juvenal an aura of reservedness and charm, which reflects brilliantly with Urbino’s style of love which is more stable than that of Florentino.Words such as “clinical”, “grace”, and “fastidious” makes Juvenal seem like a very strong and composed young man, who is emotionally healthy. These attributes accentuate the zealous love Florentino poses, thus making Juvenal the character foil for Florentino. In the other hand, Florentino can also be seen as the character foil for Juvenal, for the role of protagonist is ambiguous. However the two characters do accentuate each other contradicting attributes, showing that juxtaposition is taking place in the book.
Furthermore, differences between characters can be seen more clearly by analyzing how other characters in the novel interact with them. One character in the book highlights the premise expressed in the previous sentence, and that character is Lorenzo Daza. Lorenzo Daza is Fermina Daza’s father, and the character that behaves distinctly different between Florentino and Juvenal.
Firstly, lets take Florentino’s interaction with Lorenzo, when Lorenzo finds out that Florentino is the secret lover Fermina has been hiding he goes to talk to him, “man to man” (78). In this confrontation Lorenzo is sorrowful and sincere towards Florentino; he tells Florentino with a firm voice to, “ Get out of our way” (81). This section also reveals that Lorenzo has one objective in his life, “ to turn his daughter into a great lady” (81). These components lead to the conclusion that Florentino will not help in Fermina’s climbing of the social ladder, which hinders Florentino’s chances with Fermina later in the novel. Furthermore, after Florentino expresses his unmovable resolve to be with Fermina to Lorenzo, Lorenzo threatens to shoot him and takes Fermina away until she returns and no longer adores Florentino. Taking this fact, we look at Juvenal’s experience with Lorenzo which begins when Fermina rudely slams the window on Juvenal’s face after his attempt at talking to her. Witnessing this Lorenzo comes, with anger to Fermina, to remedy the situation and maintain the interest Juvenal has towards her because as mentioned before Lorenzo’s primary objective is to, “ to turn his daughter into a great lady” and Juvenal will be able to assist in it. Therefore, Lorenzo becomes overly courteous and kind when dealing with Juvenal. This is highly contrary to the attitude Lorenzo shows towards Florentino. This comparison highlights the effect social status has on Florentino and Juvenal’s storyline in the novel, while Florentino fails to be with Fermina Juvenal succeeds. This becomes more noticeable with the use of juxtaposition.
Themes such as love and class awareness while evident in the novel become clearer after the use of juxtaposition. Marquez puts Juvenal and Florentino in a parallel to accentuate these themes, and show the reader two sides of a tale. As one compares and analyses the differences of the characters subtle characteristics become visible, which adds on to the story itself and the characterization of the character too. To exemplify, Juvenal is a composed  yet charming character which becomes more evident when compared to Florentino who is zealous and volatile. While Juvenal appears solid and strong emotionally, Florentino seems emotionally fragile and weak.

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